Monday, December 22, 2014

THE LETTER by Angelynn L. Pineda-FICTION STORY/LETTER #2

Dear Natalie,
  I have read your letter and I'm doing fine. I really hope that you're fine too, because I've heard that there were many floods happening in Alaska. I'm doing well in the farm. I had enough ingredients to make a pumpkin pie. I knew you would want some but unfortunately, Jake ate the leftovers so I can't send some pie to you. Speaking of Jake he's okay and he recovered from the flu. He also tried to eat a worm yesterday, but good thing I was watching him or he might get sick;
he is so crazy. Lisa came over and we played some games, but I don't know what they're called. Yesterday, I milked Betty the cow and helped Mama make dinner. When I had my break I went outside to hear Lisa scream. When I got to her side I saw that one of her father's chickens died last night.She screamed because it had a huge bite in it's side. A fox must have sneaked into the chicken coop and took that chicken. Lisa's father wasn't angry. He said when he was younger, lots of foxes would sneak into the chicken coop and eat a chicken or two. Then the next morning, Snow Bell was whining on the ground in pain, a gash on her side told me that she was bitten by a fox, we immediately brung her to the imfirmary and thankfully she survived. I hope you get my letter, see you soon.

                                                                                     Love,
                                                                                    Ellie    

4 comments:

  1. There will be more :)

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  2. Yassss!! Awesome story angelynn, I'm going to edit a bit but it'll stay the same

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    1. Kay, done. Just a bunch periods, commas, spelling errors

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    2. but why did u edit it nothings wrong w/ it is there?

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